Arkadaşlar ben bir ingilizce rüya yazdım 8.sınıfım yanlışları düzeltirmisiniz?

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In my dream, I was a space.Ewerywhere was white.I heard a voice.Bigbang o my god.What's happening ? And again there was silence.I fell down.I couldn't understand.I tried understand but I couldn't.Unless the I was snowflake.